You Lost Me At Hello

You Lost Me At Hello

A Poem by ..R.I.P..

"You Lost Me At Hello"

 

You lost me at hello

I was stunned speachless

You lost me at hello

I couldn't help but stare

You lost me at hello

I got lost in your eyes

You lost me at hello

And I knew I loved you then

© 2009 ..R.I.P..


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The title made me want to read the poem; that's always good. It's not very often you get one of those.

I liked how the title could mean one thing, and then in the poem it starts meaning something completely different, going from "you stunned me" to "you made me love you". That was pretty cool.

I also liked the tie between "love at first sight" and losing someone "at hello".

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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That was very beautiful.
Truly enjoyable.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is a cute poem. Make you think of the 'love at first sight' thing. That's never happened to me personally but who knows? I'm still young lol so there is plenty of time for that to happen. Nice poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A very romantic poem. I really dig this one.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Loved this dreamy little poem which shows how one so young can show so much promise i am in awe of your writing and hopefully you will be a successful writer where you deserve success, will have to include an all inclusive tour with no expenses if you are going to save up never mind it's the getting there that counts.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The title is misleading, but eye-catching. I like how you think it'll be sad, but then it becomes a love story at the end. Good play on words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awwww thats sweet

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The title made me want to read the poem; that's always good. It's not very often you get one of those.

I liked how the title could mean one thing, and then in the poem it starts meaning something completely different, going from "you stunned me" to "you made me love you". That was pretty cool.

I also liked the tie between "love at first sight" and losing someone "at hello".

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Beauiful peom. I like how you reffer back to the thought that it was love at first sight because "you lost me at hello." Nice flow. Amazing! I also liked the font becasue it grabbed my attention immedately! Nice write and beautiful short poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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