Hope- A Polished Land

About the uncleaned and untidy land...

I had a dream of a dream,
A nation full of beautiful cream,
The soil on which i born is mine,
Why i depend on others to clean it's wine,
Am i doing duty only to get money?,
Results in nothing giving my land a look of funny.

Have i contributed any thing to my nation?,
Or i am busy in doing my ownfashion,
But never the less i had given a bad creation,

They are my friends who eat tobacco,
Doesn't mean they can throw on streets and become psycho.

Have i ever resisted myself on wrond deed?,
It react in none other than making me weed.The culture i lost ,the image i imposed,
Hints that my thoughts are getting paused.
I am the one who created child labour,
I am the one who did this favour,
Will i ever be the one to become a jaber,

I am GOD of waste,
I am the generator ,
I am the operator, And i am the destroyer.

I usually show my nature of nice,
Every deed of mine progresses in country's demise.
For selfishness i played this as a game,
But how so ever i lost my own fame.
What a sort of player i am,
Just putting water on futures lamp.

The water i worshiped main,
I put every thing in it how insane.

Now, i want a hope of life ,
Without land and water how will i survive.
I regret on my act of self-interest,
Surely i will bring my nation up from waste arrest.
I won't be afraid of people's thought,
Because i am the one who started this fought.I regret that i spoiled a lot,
But a sign of happiness that i wont be fully caught.
Thank you

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A lot was said in the poetry.
"Now, i want a hope of life ,
Without land and water how will i survive.
I regret on my act of self-interest, "
All of us waste and it is sad. We need water and earth more then she needs us. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jasbir Kaur]

Thank you so much Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Jasbir.

[Mansu vml]

Enjoyed.. keep sharing.. :)

[Jasbir Kaur]

Thank you so much

[Mansu vml]

My pleasure

[Xxxxxx]

Very beautiful poem. Really enjoyed reading it.

[Jasbir Kaur]

Thank you so much

[horizon]

It is a great hope fir our country...we should give everything back...the prosperity,generosity,the glory of our country...we should understand the need to co operate and initially take steps...I do it ..whatever I can do...I don't care about people...our country has to change for it's own good...but first the mentality of the people should be changed...
Nice poetry

[Jasbir Kaur]

Thank you so much

[horizon]

My pleasure

[tanmay7551]

Well written and crafted to show the nations plight and contribution of citizens towards negatives that hampers the nation.

Good job.

[Jasbir Kaur]

Thank you tanmay

[Riya patel]

It takes a lot to take an initiative to change the nation but it can only happen when the mentality of people changes great thoughts expressed keep it up

[Jasbir Kaur]

Thank you riya