A Poem by Jasmin


When your heart breaks

When your heart dies dull

What goes next

Is it your soul?

So when your soul cracks

When your soul has given up, given up and disappeared 

What goes next?

Your sanity? if so

I think i may be going insane...



© 2009 Jasmin

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When you heart dies dull....love that line. Don't go insane, people will miss you... heavy sigh. Nice short poem with a powerful point. Loved it.

Posted 13 Years Ago

A sad, but beautiful read. Well Done!

Posted 13 Years Ago

damn...love the perspective in this poem...short and to the point... brilliant piece... great job.

Posted 14 Years Ago

This is very nice,very true,and sad..everyone has gone through this ,i certainly did at times,so I felt those
words so strongly..
When your heart breaks,it remains that it dies,so what next,its your soul
then it will crack..when your soul has given up and disappeared
Remains your sanity..remains that you go insane..
but then you remember that you should not lose a fight so easy
so you will have to stand up and defend what remained left of your life
its not easy to to let all just go,you will have to hold yourself strong
and try to save what could be saved just to keep you going
very nice write ,I felt every word of it,and i really loved it..

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on June 16, 2009
Last Updated on July 9, 2009




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