Who Am I?

Who Am I?

A Poem by JasminJoy
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This is a short poem about how others are quick to judge me, yet they don't even know me. Nevertheless, they find out that I am no greater or worse than them.

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They ask me, “Who exactly are you?” I think to myself… “Who am I?”
Am I an evil conspirator as they call me out to be?
Or am I just dealing with the fact that they do not understand my reality?
Are they portraying me to be a person with no filter or shame?
Practically going through a trial of life they think is a game?
Am I confused or amused by their belittling sneers?
As they try to change who I am, and make me to fear?
Yet the feeling of spite, malice, and grief
Has vanished from me, the bitter feelings still sink
Sink deep into the depths of a soul I once knew
Forever forgotten, the birth of someone else anew
The childish games I used to play remain a memory back to the very first day
There is no more tolerance for ignorance, and I refuse to listen and to cooperate.
Though the past serves a purpose of making me who I am today
Strong in my youth, revived, I strive to make a better pathway
The trail to riches, glistening silver and gold
Mansions, Ferraris, treasures untold
They are the goals of many, the desire of man
Though they bring luxury, does simple wealth understand?
The power of knowledge, education, and wisdom is at hand
A man will think he’s traveled far with expensive houses and luxury cars
Though, what most do not know, is that your intelligence always shows
The judgment occurs when your bank account is high, yet your intelligence is low
When your future is impaired, your life is at stake
Your riches begin to fade, your empire begins to break
You suddenly remember how your goals were unrealistic
Not knowing what would happen when you foolishly disregard the statistics
Without an education by your side, how do you expect to be your own guide?
What you had in mind to foolishly attempt
What you knew was the impossible, but down the way you went
A path of destruction set ahead in time
Now you’re left with no friends, no home, not a nickel, nor dime
So I sit back and realize education is something you must obtain
For without that in life, what all do you expect to gain?
So answer the everlasting question, Who Am I?
I am not the evil soul that I am called out to be, nor am I an angel in disguise
I am a being who knows my worth and am true to myself
Blessed to be alive, with a bright future, with knowledge, and good health
I do not play with the facts of life, nor do I play games with my one and only life
I go over the speed bumps in my life, leaving me little to no strife
I am someone with enough common sense to know what is important comes first
That I have a better purpose in life than just a wondering soul walking on earth
So all in all, with that being said, the question remains, “Who am I?”
I am no one greater or lesser than the next, a blessing, not a curse, but not an angel in disguise
I am human a mere human, just like you. I eat, sleep, and speak as you do
I walk with both feet, I see with both eyes
I walk the same Earth, must I still ask, “Who am I?”
I still feel pain, I feel fear, and joy
I know how it feels to be loved; how it feels to be cherished
How it feels to be heartbroken, and sometimes even discouraged
I feel as a woman would, who wants nothing more than to be appreciated, love, and wanted
I also can feel as a man, who fears nothing, who is strong, and won’t back down when confronted
I laugh when I am tickled, I scream when I am in pain
I sometimes deal with emotionally stress, and other times, I feel completely sane
I do not have a secret identity, I am true to myself
So why one would think I’m a shame? This is truly beyond me.
I am no greater or lesser than you
“Who I Am?”
Just as you, I am just a human being

© 2014 JasminJoy


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JasminJoy
Please review and critique me on my writing style, grammar, theme etc. I would gladly appreciate examples that you may have.

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Great work. I should say: you must be lucky, for you've been able to write all these words about yourself. You're either close enough to finding out who you really are, or you're a great writer. I see both. And the theme, I'd like to write about too if I can.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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JasminJoy

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your feedback, I do appreciate it :)



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Great work. I should say: you must be lucky, for you've been able to write all these words about yourself. You're either close enough to finding out who you really are, or you're a great writer. I see both. And the theme, I'd like to write about too if I can.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JasminJoy

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your feedback, I do appreciate it :)

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I am an 18 year old college student, enrolled in Francis Marion University, graduating in 2018, and one of my many passions is writing. My plan is to graduate with a Bachelor's Degree in Journalism/Ma.. more..

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