Thinking?

Half of your life was spent in food snoars and drinking !
the other half of it , you wasted in thinking

I am gonna do this or do that
I am gonna grow strong or burn fat !
I wish to fly high or swim in !
I will study hard or won't win

life passed away in a moment of blink
what am i saying here?
Please dont think

i wana live in a penthouse and meet brad Pitt
aww
you stay in 2BHK now ! too big to fit !

drive Mercedes home and rest in your pool !
you repair trucks now with same old tool !

order your favourite pastas! show em credit card!
chicks call you waiter now
life is so hard

now stop thinking !
you thought enough
roll up your emotions
light it for a puff !

time is money
And
you don't have any !
your life is still sinking
you better stop thinking

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Oh I love this. This caught my attention. A lot of people day dream too much and often wrap themselves in the pool of the fame and attention they see that celebrities get. To be frank, all the money and attention would be nice..but most of those people don't have a nice heart or don't have enough TIME for those that they need the most. I agree that these daydreamers need to stop dreaming and float back to reality. It's nice to dream every once in awhile but all of the time sets our mind in another setting. Great write.

[Girl With A Pen]

I adore this poem! It really says something. At one point or another we will always find ourselves dreaming about what we want to have more then what we need to have. A wonderful, wonderful poem! :)

[Jas_I_M]

Thank you angela :) Glad you liked it

[Manuel A Hurtado]

I enjoy the whimsical mood of your poems, and appreciated the final, foreboding warning given with "Your life is still sinking. Well done.