"Thunder"

"Thunder"

A Poem by Jaweena...Eileen Quintana
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Haiku about thunderstorm.

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Thunder rumbles deep

Lightning flash down canyon walls

the gods have spoken!

 

 

© 2011 Jaweena...Eileen Quintana


Author's Note

Jaweena...Eileen Quintana
I took a drive on Nebo loop yesterday, over the mountain range that sits south of my home. Coming back down the steep mountain trail I hit the most spectacular thunderstorm I have ever gone through! Magnificent! I was humbled.

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There is a powerful confession in your words.. the realization that life is so much bigger... that there is more than we can see or feel. Such wonders are often lost when we hide ourselves inside and close the blinds.. We must breathe in this glory and know it calls to us.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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White light surrounds me, as the lightning strikes near me... I hear no thunder.

I appreciate thunderstorms... and survive them at the same time. Beautifully written haiku. Thank you for the privilege of reading your work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The power of nature can create life and can destroy cities in second. I like the description of thunder. Thank you for the amazing poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have never seen thunder and lightening in the mountains. It must be something!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love thunderstorms...powerful and peaceful at th same time. Reading this made me wish I was there. Beautiful write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nizhoni! I closed my eyes...felt the thunder, saw the lightning flashing.
Wonderful!

Posted 9 Years Ago


So many ways does nature talk to us..the old gods reflecting all in a raindrop from a storm that talks to all, another powerful piece here, your writing makes me feel so alive and graced to know we are led by nature, if only we listen!
xoxo

Posted 9 Years Ago


There is a powerful confession in your words.. the realization that life is so much bigger... that there is more than we can see or feel. Such wonders are often lost when we hide ourselves inside and close the blinds.. We must breathe in this glory and know it calls to us.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love how you are able to turn such an amazing moment into a shared experience with those who read your work. Wonderful!! :) Thank you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice work Jaweena, love the imagery

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lightning is an amazing force of nature , a thunderous Haiku

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jaweena...Eileen Quintana
Jaweena...Eileen Quintana

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"Ya'at'eeh" means hello in the Navajo language. My name is Eileen Quintana....Jaweena was a name that my brother called me when I was a baby. I am learning how to write about my unique perspective.. more..

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