snowflakes

haiku

cloud droplets frozen
icy crystal clusters fall
snowflakes flutter down

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

What amazes me most about the snow, is how it falls...without a sound. Wonderful Haiku, Eileen!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful description of a snowflake. A amazing poem.
Coyote

[Clockwork]

There is so much sound in these three short lines. I could almost hear a gentle wind. How those snowflakes come and cover the plains in patterns of delicate crystals. This is a beautiful haiku.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Snow in DineTaa today. Our world is white here in the land of your Cousins.
Lovely visuals in this perfect haiku.

[WhiteWillow]

I miss the snow (an unusually mild winter in the Northeast). So quiet and peaceful as it falls.

[Chris]

Haiku does not snore,
or cry because snowballs sting
...it just holds our souls.

[Tate Morgan]

So like the days I remember from childhood and the sunshine that reflected from them

[emmajoy]

Your words are as beautiful as the happening .. you truly do see with clear eyes. Plus, there's that gentle difference between 'fall' and 'flutter'.

A wonderful haiku. (You)