Flawed Friends

Flawed Friends

A Poem by JayJayBlue
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About cheering up and helping a friend who is down in the dumps

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My friend is missing every second of sleep
And I'm slowly seeing the signs
The wrong note in the orchestra

We've suffered together
And at each other's expense
Falling off the pedestals 

Here we are
Friends through mutual sorrow
We were drifting, now spiralling
The summer's far behind us
And all of our dreams 
Scorched to dust

Now we're drinking away the night
We're prototype of a life's design
Moulded and shoddily cast

We're ostracised and downtrodden
In our final, sad defence 
Look how far we can fall

Friends through mutual sorrow
We were drifting, now spiralling
The summer's far behind us
And all of our dreams 
Scorched to dust

© 2013 JayJayBlue


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wow, really nice talking about friendship :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JayJayBlue

10 Years Ago

Thank you, I felt it was time to discuss the necessity of friendship, even with the mutual destructi.. read more
Katie

10 Years Ago

wow, yes it is, especially on here when you put it in such great wording :)

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Added on September 11, 2013
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Tags: friendship, help, outcast

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JayJayBlue
JayJayBlue

Somewhere in the middle , West Midlands, United Kingdom



About
What to say, I'm Jay (as you've guessed haha) I'm a guy who likes to write lyrical-poems, influenced by bands like Manic Street Preachers, Foo Fighters, Smashing Pumpkins, Pearl Jam, Stereophonics.. more..

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