On The Bonfire

On The Bonfire

A Poem by JayJayBlue
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About admitting that you are beyond salvation and help

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I'm just a pariah
A Guy Fawkes to send to the Inquisition
And place on top of the autumn fire
I'm the necessary evil
Sent to darken the clouds
And poison the atmosphere

I've seen myself transition from hero to villain
And mirrors crack
All fractured like my soul
I've appeared before the judges
Guilty of all your accusations
I'll just cast a shrug in your direction

I'm just the visage
Of all your failures and sorrows
True love is unhealthy, a mirage
I'm the false salvation
Sent to conspire against you
And destroy all creation

I've seen myself sent to the gallows
Before the noose
I only regret bringing everyone else
Down into hell with me
Ready for the end
I'll just smirk at your belligerent stares

Come and fall away
Hell is not romantic
Heaven is not a paradise
Come with me and stay
I'm not seductive
I'm flawed like you
 

© 2013 JayJayBlue


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I see the most bitter pinch of pessimism in this piece. Self-realization to such an extent with such a negative impact. It's a nice work, but i wish to read the counter part of this version too! :) thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


One of the best poems I've related myself with. Jay, this is fantastic! Straight to the point and -ugh- hurts to the core. Oh my, I love this, :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow interesting perspective. To see a hero become a villain and how his mind works. Very gruelling but interesting and gripping to the end. Nice write mate. I'd like more requests from you :) x

Posted 10 Years Ago


I can take a guess about who this is about. Nice poem dude.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on October 31, 2013
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Tags: salvation, sin, evil, acceptance

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JayJayBlue
JayJayBlue

Somewhere in the middle , West Midlands, United Kingdom



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What to say, I'm Jay (as you've guessed haha) I'm a guy who likes to write lyrical-poems, influenced by bands like Manic Street Preachers, Foo Fighters, Smashing Pumpkins, Pearl Jam, Stereophonics.. more..

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