Miracles
A Poem by JayceeC
 a senryu  © 2016 JayceeC
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part of an older poem turned senryu
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Simply gorgeous, dear poet...simply gorgeous :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
sometimes simplicity is best I think
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awesome........
those kind of moments are the best...........
lovely senryu....
i really liked it!!!
:)
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
It's a very modern English senryu, not strict count more short-long-short format. This is the last t.. read moreIt's a very modern English senryu, not strict count more short-long-short format. This is the last two lines of Define Breath, restructured for brevity contest.
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9 Years Ago
........i am not so good in the syllable and poetry form format.........and that must not be a surpr.. read more........i am not so good in the syllable and poetry form format.........and that must not be a surprise for you........i counted then only after reading your comment..............doesn't change a thing......its still awesome!!! :) :)
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9 Years Ago
Not everyone is a syllable counter..and shouldn't be. Your work is uniquely you and always interesti.. read moreNot everyone is a syllable counter..and shouldn't be. Your work is uniquely you and always interesting to read.
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9 Years Ago
thank you J.............means a lot!!!! :) :)
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Added on February 4, 2016
Last Updated on February 4, 2016
Tags: Love, sleep, senryu
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JayceeCTX
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