Haikus

Remembering the past

Wondering what went wrong with us

Where'd you go my friend

 

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Birds singing up high

Playing with their own voices

A choir to my ears

 

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Lightning strikes the sky

Rain comes tumbling down on me

Happiness is bliss

Reviews

[BlyndSikick]

Short, sweet, and to the point, haikus are a great way to show little bits of emotion. I'd love to see what you could do with a longer poem. A sonnet or free-verse. Good job.