I'm Sorry

I'm Sorry

A Poem by Jeff Miller
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This was actually written as lyrics.

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Ever since the start of life

Everything's just been alright
And then I met you
You got me feeling so good, I try to leave you clues
You're the best thing that ever happened to me
You have my heart, and I gave you the key
 
(chorus)
I said I liked you
And you said you felt the same way too
I should've jumped at the chance
We could of had our romance
But now your feelings have changed, you're staying with your dad
And we both feel sad
Girl, I'm so sorry
 
It doesn't matter if we're a couple or just friends
Either way I'm gonna stick with you until the end
I'll always want more
I love you straight to the core
I've never felt anything in the world like this before
I know you're involved
If you weren't the problem might be solved
But you are
I just hope I don't give you a scar
 
(chorus) 2x

© 2009 Jeff Miller


Author's Note

Jeff Miller
Written when I was 15

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stupid as f**k. teehee :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


So sad. Written really well for 15.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i pretty much hate it now cuz its about someone else lol

Posted 14 Years Ago


k so you said it was horrible and itsn ot lol. i like it

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can easily see this as a lyric. For me, the hook comes in the chorus when her feelings change. Nicely done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 26, 2009

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Jeff Miller
Jeff Miller

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I'm 23 years old, married to Sarah for 3 years, and have one puppy. We just had our first angel, Audrey. I love literature and music. My wife was my biggest inspiration, the reason for over 100 pieces.. more..

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