Him

I don't believe this is completely strong or powerful...but it does say a lot in a short amount of words

 

I wanna be him

Yet I know my chances of that coming true are slim

I’m not good enough

The skin of my heart is beginning to become calloused and rough

I can’t stop writing how I feel

Because I hope it’ll help me heal

And help me realize what’s real

It’s hard to cope knowing that I probably won’t get my chance

That between you and me there will never be a shared romance

Everything seems to be so absolute

The point has almost become moot

I want to just spill my entire heart and soul out to you

To tell you what I want and I wish I could hear that you, even if just a miniscule amount, felt the same way too

To me that would be a miracle, it would be magic

And maybe my outlook would be just a little bit less tragic…

Reviews

[Sarah]

yeah i agree with my past self down there you are a copy cat lol but you are HIM now :)

[Sarah]

COPYCAT!

[Ashley;]

Brilliant (:

[Sarah]

i already reviewed it but i liked it so much i'm going to review it again! lol yay! go HEFF ! YES!

[Sarah]

Heff!! its pretty much amazing! i like it allloootttttttt! even though you stole my title! haha even though you stole my tit that was pretty awesome. and yes i know i repeated because we had that awesome tit joke like two seconds ago lol! anywho yeah i like it alot. its sad though.

[Tina Kline]

A great poem of wanting, yearning and needing that other person
and just hoping to get a chance. These emotions come through
with no problem.

Really enjoyed reading this poem of yours.