Seperation Sonnet

 

Right here, right now, I am beginning to feel separation anxiety

Separated by an ignorant teacher

In alphabetical order, I feel like an outcast in society

People shouldn’t be labeled by names, just like poetry shouldn’t be measured by meter

Who cares if our last names are different? Is that a just cause?

A just cause to tear and twist us apart?

An excellent poem, the author not concerned with meter, was labeled with flaws

Every word though, speaks for the heart

Every word has a meaning

Every word is true

It is connected to a variety of feelings

Do not separate me; do not rip away our glue

I need her next to me

For that is the way it was meant to be

Reviews

[Sarah]

SO SAD

[Sarah]

i miss you

[Hello, Goodbye]

It is a bit ambiguous. Sporadic in its content and message.

[deeps]

This is a very expressive piece here and such emotion. I think it is well expressed. I think it sounds fine.

[Jeff Miller]

This piece is probably not very good, I feel like the topic changes and moves, and it was a quick write in class.