Our Love Sonnet

I'm not sure how much I like this or not...

Our love is amazing

Your body is like music to my ears

Your kiss is mesmerizing

Our love is something I thought I’d never find in a million years

It is the epitome

The one true perfect love

That always fills your heart and mind with glee

Your beauty overpowers the flawless white dove

You are my perfect princess and I am your charming prince

I felt something the first time I ever saw you

And I’ve been yours ever since

And this year we finally got the clue

No longer do you see through a veil
And we know that we are our own fairy tale

Author's Note

Ignore meter

Reviews

[Sarah]

so like i can't stop laughing cuz i like your bread

[LisetteCanWrite!]

This was very youthful and full of passion! I really liked the flow and your rhythm and rhyme were great as well. The message is one of young undying love.. with a timeless fairytale setting.. being declared.. great job!

[deeps]

This is a one wonderful write here. Enjoyable read.

[Sarah]

its locked on my phone

[Sarah]

I LOOVVVEEEE IIITTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D yay!

[Sheila Kline]

Well, since I love romance and poems that speak of total head over heels, mad about you sentiments, I LOVE IT!!!
What a fairy tale!! Delightful, just delightful!