Waiting for the Thunder

Waiting for the Thunder

A Poem by Jeff Miller
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My second poem directed at my crazy ex-girlfriend who is stalking me and my betrothed girlfriend.

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Things are falling asunder

The lightning has struck

Now I’m waiting for the thunder

I wonder if I have any luck

I feel like I am now living a life of burden

So much drama, so many problems, so many issues

This shan’t be excused with a pardon

All I need is to be with you

Let’s try to keep ignoring her

She’s as nasty as chocolate milk

That you haven’t had a chance to stir

If she were a piece of clothing she wouldn’t be made of silk

Nor cotton

She would be lucky to be considered a reed

Forsooth, she is rotten

In society’s garden she is a weed

She is an ignorant child

With people she seems to have no education

From our lives she has been exiled

If life was a class she would be in remediation

We know how wicked she is and of her evil ways

So, let’s not let her destroy our fairy tale days

© 2010 Jeff Miller


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I cant feel for the story because i dont kno to wat severity you call you x insane or what she is like but saying that the story is imbeded in the tale the want to be with the one you love but the hinderance this other female is causing, the pain and needs clearly painted across teh words another great read for me today they seem common tonight i am pleased with my midnight reading x

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I cant feel for the story because i dont kno to wat severity you call you x insane or what she is like but saying that the story is imbeded in the tale the want to be with the one you love but the hinderance this other female is causing, the pain and needs clearly painted across teh words another great read for me today they seem common tonight i am pleased with my midnight reading x

Posted 14 Years Ago


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omg...f*****g crazy c**t...i love it

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jeff Miller
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I'm 23 years old, married to Sarah for 3 years, and have one puppy. We just had our first angel, Audrey. I love literature and music. My wife was my biggest inspiration, the reason for over 100 pieces.. more..

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