After-Effect

After-Effect

A Poem by Jenna

The sadness,
The anger
Has left me.
All that's left is the after-effect.
Feeling numb
Can't feel a thing.
The after-effect.
It sucks up all of my energy
Can't breathe...
The after-effect

© 2010 Jenna


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Jenna
Basically how I feel after I have cried and then suddenly there is nothing at all.

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Dang girl... This was really really really really good lol sorry im hyper but yeah loved it.. love and miss ya girl

Posted 13 Years Ago


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LSS
Jenna, I love the power you write in this poem. It is short, yet gets the message across. It invokes a farther reaching story that remains untold, and keeps the reader guessing, while urging them to draw from their own reserves to understand what they are feeling as they read this wonderful poem. To you it may seem, "nothing at all." but, to us, each one will experience some distant pain or remembrance, and interpret "The after-effect" as something unique to each of us. Thank you.
LSS


Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this. You did very well explaining the feeling of "The after effect." :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love the structure to this piece:)
It helps the words hit even harder
A solemn and haunting poem, love it! xx

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on May 18, 2010
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