That's What You Get For Liking a Psychotic B***h

She is sick of hypocrites

Trying to tear her apart

She won't give into it

She stays true to her heart

 

She is sick of the pathetic lies

And attempts at bringing her down

No way in hell will this be her demise

She won't even sport a frown

 

She is avoiding the girl

She once thought she knew

The truth begins to unfurl

And now she knows what to do

 

She is hurt but will grow

She will learn without a hitch

And I suppose I now know

That's what you get for liking a psychotic b***h

 

 

Reviews

[Dane Osborne]

Lord knows i've known a few in my day:D This was very well written and true. Original and tasteful use of ryhme scheme(I usually hate ryhme schemes in poems but I like it in this one). Theres nothing i can think to offer in the way of constructive criticism so that means this is a very solid piece:)

[Kayleen]

short simple and really good :) love the end

[chloe cruz]

Oh, who hasn't witnessed the wrath of a psychotic b***h, hehe... This was a wonderful take on her, and I loved it to pieces. The flow expressed all feeling, thoughts... Completely wonderful. Terrific write, Jen!

Chloe.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is really good... there are alot of those out there, good write