Flawless Design

Flawless Design

A Poem by Jen
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Inspiration: Come Home - Onerepublic (I get lost in the beauty of everything I see; the world ain't half as bad as they paint it to be)

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It takes my breath away,
At every sign.
It leaves me with no words to say,
With it's flawless design.

If only the world could see what I see,
A world lacking hate;
Imagine how that would be,
But maybe it's too late.

I see a world full of miracles,
A place of wonder.
The world sees disorder
From six feet under.

Leave the hate behind,
And hold your arms wide open.
You only live one time -
This ain't no play per token.

© 2010 Jen


Author's Note

Jen
Singing come home by onrepublic waiting for the bus today, i thought about stuff and decided to write about how i feel about the world... enjoy :-)

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It's always struck me as a little sad that the only perfect world we can find is within our own dreams . . .

Posted 11 Years Ago


hey great stuff here, i like it alot.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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excellent, love it

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on October 26, 2010
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