What I need from you.

What I need from you.

A Poem by Jennifer94
"

If you only could've tried, I might not have fallen apart.

"

 

Listen to my cries

Screaming in my head

 

Acknowledge the pained looks

When we sit amongst our friends

 

Hold out your hand

To receive some of the pain I feel

 

Pull me to my feet

As I sink slowly to my knees

 

Hold me close

As I feel myself floating away

 

Pull the blade from my grasp

Before I leave more scars

 

Hold me close

And pretend you care

© 2009 Jennifer94


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Beautifully written.
One I could relate to myself.
"Hold out your hand To receive some of the pain I feel" I love that line, it says so much without having to explain in detail.


Posted 14 Years Ago


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