Way

Way

A Poem by J.A.N

One page left blank

Can’t find the time

Of day to illuminate

Words of grace and

Dear God save her

For she has lost her

Way

© 2011 J.A.N


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The picture first captured my attention. Overall, I enjoyed it, particularly the beginning, for the end may be slightly obvious for my taste.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Short but too the point. Great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This has a surprising amount of depth for the length. I really like it. Keep writing powerfully and short, because you seem particularly good at it.
I wish poems of this length, with this plot, would be formed into a story or book.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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J.A.N

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