Way

Way

A Poem by J.A.N

One page left blank

Can’t find the time

Of day to illuminate

Words of grace and

Dear God save her

For she has lost her

Way

© 2011 J.A.N


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The picture first captured my attention. Overall, I enjoyed it, particularly the beginning, for the end may be slightly obvious for my taste.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Short but too the point. Great job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This has a surprising amount of depth for the length. I really like it. Keep writing powerfully and short, because you seem particularly good at it.
I wish poems of this length, with this plot, would be formed into a story or book.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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