Opal dream

Opal dream

A Poem by Jesscribbles
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To live a life of colour!

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I want to be like you
Precious stone
with depths 
and magnificent hues
You have an infinite range
of magical beauty
flashing brilliant sparks
of light and painted palette

I want to be how you
sweet gem
with sparkles
and unique splendour
Constantly change your colour
You the good luck charm
to entrance many
such a wondrous thing!

I want to be like you
unrivalled art
with hope
and spiritual healing
You have endless capabilities
stone of love
gentle dragons breath
worn close to the heart

I want to be how you
danger protector
with emotionalism
and ignited passion
held at your core
You awaken the inner fire
tones compelling
a symbol of inhibitions

I want to be like you
fiery sensual
with ability
and cherished affection
towards your round face
beloved one
of amplified energy
such superior grace

© 2014 Jesscribbles


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Since I use a lot of repetition I like this style. I enjoyed the verses that use the term "be like you" more than the verses that began with "be how you". It's a subtle change but one that found be lost a bit thru those verses. Great job capturing the qualities of an opal ( : O )

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on June 26, 2014
Last Updated on July 8, 2014
Tags: poetry, dreaming, stone, beauty, life, colour

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Jesscribbles
Jesscribbles

United Kingdom



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