Two Different Worlds

Two Different Worlds

A Poem by Jessi Raine is falling
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Some people shop
some cut

Some have a family
Some have torn lives

Some Live life to the fullest
Some end them quickly

Some Cry
Some Die
Some hide
Some try

And Some cant go through the pain...What will You Do?

© 2010 Jessi Raine is falling


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This reminds me of Emily Dickinson's poem "I can Wade Grief"

Very nice:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


In the LIne "Some Live like to the fullest" did you mean "some live life?"That part confused me a bit, but other than that, I liked it. the last line was awsome. Almost took my breath away.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is full of feeling here.
Alot of pain is expressed.
Very well written.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 29, 2010
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Jessi Raine is falling
Jessi Raine is falling

Pratt, KS



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I love, i lose, i cry, and i sigh. But hey that's life. more..

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