Lost

Lost feeling to care
Lost sympathy to spare
Lost patience to bear
Lost sense to keep fair

Lost endurance, to follow restriction
Lost peace, to stop frustration
Lost power, to avoid attention
Lost strength, to shun aggression

Lost courage, to sacrifice
Lost kindness, to be polite
Lost temper, to keep quiet
Lost thought, to be right

Lost anger, to control
Lost opinion, to give poll
Lost desire, to keep goal
Lost myself, to have a role...

Reviews

[Jessica Alvarez]

thnx :) im glad you guys liked :)

[Alvin L. Kathembe]

Lost myself, to have a role...

another very impressive effort, the rhyme scheme is outstanding....great subject matter! you write very well :)

[Short.Nerd]

Wonderful write! Great job:)

[Thea Fuentebella]

i also wrote a poem which all the lines start with the word 'crying'. i haven't posted it yet since i'm bored to type it haha.
it's fascinating and beautiful and clever. you have a lot of losses.
keep up the good wotk :)

[Arabdha]

i agree with Sasayaki..the rhyming is great..i can feel the sadness with which this poem is written..fantastic

[MichelleClay]

very clever! I enjoyed this read.

[Alexis]

This poem was AMAZING. I thought it was so full of thought and emotion and I just thought it was beautiful. I liked your rhyming- I find it sometimes difficult to find words that rhyme and you made it look super easy. I also like how you formed each line, all of it packed with almost a feeling of helplessness or sadness. I'm going to add this to my favorites. Wonderful job. I loved it.