Writing Your Name

I wrote your name in the sky,
but the wind blew it away.
I wrote your name in the sand,
but the waves washed it away.
I wrote you name in my heart,
and forever it will stay.

Reviews

[LadyNaida]

This is beautiful and heartfelt.

[Thea Fuentebella]

sweet imaginative little poem. short but it gives a strong impact on the reader. its simplicity is surprising. poets often have to complicate matters to make it more beautiful, but this one here's an exception. nice!

[Short.Nerd]

I love that saying:)

[EmeraldFacet]

Simply beautiful!

[Karli]

Touches the soul, and with only few words. Excellent job:)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Sweet poem...
Touching story.

[Alexis]

Short and sweet. Beautiful. Once again, I could tell this came from your heart.

[?]

Beautiful,
short but says alot from the heart

[Jessica Alvarez]

thnx :)

[Murtuza]

The heart is pretty good for storing stuff like that :)
Nice read!