Problems

Problems

A Poem by JessicaGadziala

The problem is he didnt 
gently put me down-
he dropped me
and my pieces
splintered all around.
and I guess I just 
didn't have the supplies
needed to soften my edges.
So when anyone tries
to hold me tight
they come up bloody and bruised
skin scarred and painful
from being loved and abused
and the problem is...
I can't be the knife
you love and 
allow to f**k up your life
and I have scars of my
own from loving edges
sharp enough to hurt me
and I promised myself 
I would never be
marks on someone's skin.

"problems" - jessicagadziala

© 2013 JessicaGadziala


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WOW! I really like this poem It's deep and somewhat dark. you have a really good talent don't let anyone tell you differnt. It's people like you that inspire me to write about feelings, good and bad. really good jessie

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Added on November 5, 2013
Last Updated on November 12, 2013
Tags: poem, poems, poetry, creative writing, heartbreak, breakups, writing, personal, love, relationships, abuse, abusive relationships

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My name is Jessie. Coffee addict, bibliophile, crazy bird lady. Sometimes I write. more..

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