All My Loving

All My Loving

 

Tomorrow, today

I write poem for you every day,

Writing lovely words just for you,

For you are my inspiration,

My inspiration that taught me,

Taught me what is like being in love

 

Writing poems for you is lovely,

Lovely for it makes me feel in love with you,

It’s like writing love letters for you,

Love letters that cannot be sent to you,

But I still write and hope,

Hope that all my dreams will come true

 

Dreaming of you always,

Dreaming that I could kiss those lips,

Lips that I’m missing,

Missing to see smile,

Smile that could completes my day,

My day that I want to spend only with you

 

Thinking of you in every way,

Kissing you in every dream I am dreaming,

Loving you every day,

Every day that I wish I could be with you,

Wish I could show that I love you so much,

Love you so much that I will give all my loving to you.

...................

Jas A. Ramos

Arayat,Pampanga,Philippines

[email protected]

Reviews

[Emily Quinn]

I beleive to be without someone you have such feelings for is a legit form of torture. What a sweet poem to someone obviously loved, writen with honest words born from the deepest dwellings of the heart. Great job, you're now going to have every female on here wanting a poem of their own!

[Brad]

someone's got it bad...hahahaha

nice po to someone special

[The Doctor]

this was really good. there is true compassion and care in these words and i simply hope that you keep up the good work.

[ForTheWorld]

nice!!! the best way for expressing love to other people is by poem, for my opinion..for writing is so powerful, and this poem is an example of strong writing cause the feeling- the romantic feeling is well-expressed

[Tate Morgan]

Desire is the strongest passion

[Erin]

You said "love" and "loving" and "kissing" a lot. Your repetition got the point across, I must say. Nice job.
PBP

[The Analog Kid]

Innocent poem. I do agree with some of what Robert said below.

[Short.Nerd]

Wow this is great!
Its so beautiful.
Keep up the good work (:

[mamabear]

WOW! Absolutely gorgeous. WOW I wish someone would write a poem like that for me.................................................................. Perhaps I should introduce you to my husband and you can show him how to write such a beautiful poem!!!!!!!!!
You have a very lucky lady!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love

mamabear x

[KatiePie]

This poem is gorgeous because of the fact that there's no fear in the tone of submission. Every line is a promise and that is one of the reasons every line is full of beauty and care. Beautiful write.

[Marie Harrison]

What a dreamy poem of devotion. I think you should show her. Surely she wouldn't turn you away. Lovely!