Misty

Misty

A Poem by J




























In

a

dream

beginning

    to dim

I

could

have

sworn

I

felt

your

    lips

upon

    my skin

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No rhyme or reason to the sudden onslaught of sentiment...;) Well said...!



Posted 12 Years Ago


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I love the simplicity of this piece! Its a short and memorable piece that I think speaks for generations. Really nicely done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreams can be so real, your words made me smile.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sentimental journey

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful! Thirteen lines - Every word - A sentimental value of love, adorned by the wind-chime of a dream unfolding upon a dream...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 21, 2011
Last Updated on September 19, 2015

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J
J

Prescott, AZ



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If i had Do-overs …. i would spend my life making SPACES and PLACES that made me smile … and i would tell you it is first about LIGHT. then about character, ambiance, originality, SURPR.. more..

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