happy

happy

A Poem by J



























rosy cheeks ‘n runny nose

soggy boots ‘n frozen toes

chattering teeth ‘n quivering knees

when i dream

          it tis of these

© 2014 J


Author's Note

J
silliness

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Silly maybe, but done with rhythm and style. I should know.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Oh my...snowball fights, grabbing to a passing auto's bumper and sliding along...

I liked this...! Crystalline...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was really great I loved it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Me thinks that it is a warm blanket dreaming these things, for it knows that when it snows, it shall get lots of attention from chilled toes! =)

Great Silliness Lady J!



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

first she seeks 'n there she goes
walkin' toots in wonderin' clothes
traveling 'neath the moonlit trees
filled with dreams
writes with ease

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ah Jill, your own stillness style..
How I liked this!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silliness is beauty when you write it .. delightful and delightful and more!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I wait out-side your door with a blanket and warm heart.

chattering teeth ‘n quivering knees

I'm saving this writing for the triple digit days that will soon arrive here in California this summer.

Thank You (J)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ever the girl... within... pretty

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 29, 2012
Last Updated on December 6, 2014

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J
J

Prescott, AZ



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If i had Do-overs …. i would spend my life making SPACES and PLACES that made me smile … and i would tell you it is first about LIGHT. then about character, ambiance, originality, SURPR.. more..

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