If

If

A Poem by Jim McKenna
"

Questionings.

"

What if

what if

what if she leaves me?

I thought.

 

What if

what if

what if she runs off with another man?

 

She wouldn't, she said,

with every measure of confidence.

And I calmed down a bit,

at least for a while.

 

Today she ran off with another man.

© 2011 Jim McKenna


Author's Note

Jim McKenna
I think these fears cross the mind of any lover out there, male or female.

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The last line struck me as funny. There's a dark humor to it.

I like this. Short, simple, to the point. A thought that crosses everyone's mind at one point or another, as you've said. This can apply to anyone and anyone can relate to it. Awesome universal poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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yes,i think we all think similar thoughts about a sig. other at times. nice job

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Although doubt can sometimes seem like paranoia, it can be quite helpful as well. Good poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The last line struck me as funny. There's a dark humor to it.

I like this. Short, simple, to the point. A thought that crosses everyone's mind at one point or another, as you've said. This can apply to anyone and anyone can relate to it. Awesome universal poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow sometime we do thing that we say we wont keep....

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this.
People shouldn't make a promise they don't know if they can keep.
It doesn't help anyone

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jim McKenna
Jim McKenna

Joplin, MO



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