Pens

Pens

A Poem by coffeequeen
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Mistakes make us human.

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People who write in pen are courageous
I write in pencil, so I don't make any mistakes
Paper represents life.
Pen is like walking on thin ice
One small movement could cause a disaster
Just like one small movement ruined my entire world.

© 2017 coffeequeen


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I really really really like this except I'm not a fan of the third line, seems redundant. Otherwise, top notch!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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I love coffee, hence the name. "Pick up your head. Don't let your crown fall." more..

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