Let Love Down

I can remember when you said you loved me

When you said you cared

I can remember when you first hugged me

And planted that first kiss

You told me I was the one

And you where the one for me too

But you let love down

You let my love down

I can remember when we planned to meet up for lunch

When you never turned up

I can remember when you were going to sleep at my house

And made up an excuse

I let all this fly over my head

And kept my love for you

But you let love down

You let my love down

I can remember when we split

When we argued all night long

I can remember when you said "don't talk to me"

And signed off

You told me to go away

As much as I didn't want to I did

You let love down

You let my love down

I can remember the nights of pain

When I would drink myself to sleep

I can remember the cuts in my heart

And I can still see the scars

I never got over you

I never would

But you let love down

You let MY love down

Reviews

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

this has so much passion in it. It seems you were truely heart broken. This poem is beautifully written, and the flow is nice. You deffinatley put a heart brake into words, nicely done:)

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

I agree this could be a good song
Maybe detach the last few lines, change them about a bit. Sweet!

[Jill Wallflower]

I see this as a song. It's really good, you cans ee emotion behind it and it is written well. Well done

[Winslow Des Totes]

I agree with BriAnna, I hear music behind this. Also, I can relate to rejection in love and I too have felt this bitter, agony. Though I do hope you have had better experiences in love since!
:D Great job! :D

[BriAnna Wyble]

this is beautiful! i can see it being a song :) excellent job!

[nemesis]

I can totally relate to what you are trying to convey with the beautiful use of words.......thumbs up from me:)

[Morrigan Nicole]

I don't know whether I should give you a thumbs up and tell you what a wonderful poem this was, or give you a hug and tell you how sorry I feel about what happened.

So, the poem was great and... sorry. :)

[Vanessa Rico]

This is so sad and painful; you have captured the essence of love lost. Great poem!