I´ll take one step

Had to say goodbye to someone last night. It was very sad, and it inspired me to write this poem.

 

I´ll take one step, maybe two

Turn back, I can´t be far away from you

I feel time slipping through my fingers

Just like you, just like love does

The more we linger

The shorter the moment seems for us

Your hand is cold, it´s a cold September

My hand to hold, you have to remember

What it felt like

Before I go left and you go right

It can´t be right, it can´t be

I´ll take one step, two, maybe three

Keep looking into your eyes

I can´t turn away, I can´t turn away

We try to say our goodbyes

Again

I did say we would be fine

It doesn’t mean forever

But every minute is

When we are not together

This is the last time I kiss you

The air grew even colder

We were still on the corner

Every time I left, I turned back

To see you waiting for me to do so

I don´t know, I don’t know

How I´ll manage to go

One step, two, three, maybe four

Turn back like I did before

Suddenly the street was bare

You were not there

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

The Uppper portion of this write's lovely, charming, lovable, memorable, sweet and kind...(when you said, i can't far away from you)..lovely line. But the lower portion's very reliable, a bit sad, memorable again ... (when you said, the street was bare but you weren't there)....
Very great and a powerful write.

Well, as i'd said that i'd love to read your some more stuffs.. and i did. I really didn;t have time to read some more because i'm writing mine one too but... but and but your stuffs're so real and powerful and they're forcing me again and again and again to read yourse one instead to write mine one.. lol HAHA:)
so.. i' just got time to read your one first..lol.

You're a great writer too ..i've got it. Well, i just read your poems. If you've written some books and story's too i'd love to read and analyse them all too as i did in poems. Hope you;d seem great there too as you're in poems. :) Now you're in my top writers Hit- List :) whenever i'll come here on this site i'll read your stuffs too.

Beautifully penn'd once again, once again you dig it. You're really going very well.

[Johanna]

Thankyou :) I´m glad you found it reliable..

Haha, I´m glad :) But of course you have to take time to write your stuff as well :) I´m just so glad you want to read it. Feel free to read more poems of mine when you have some free time :) There are some of them I´d like to hear what you think about :) You leave so detailed reviews :)

Thanks again for all your nice words! I have some stories.. but I´m not sure about them yet, and some of the are crimestories and not so much like my poems, except for the poem "She" which I wrote after being inspired by a crime episode I just watched xD But maybe if you want to you can read some of my stories later on :) I´ll be sure to check on your page as well :)

Thankyou! :)

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write. Thank you for sharing this gem...:)

[Johanna]

Thankyou for taking time to read it :)) I´m glad you liked it :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Pollai]

This is a beautiful write I enjoyed it through and through. Sad indeed but a pleasant read nevertheless. Good work :)

[Johanna]

thankyou!! :))