Fear

Read about WWII before I went to bed..and I just can´t fall asleep, so I wrote this..

FEAR

"
Read about WWII before I went to bed..and I just couldn´t fall asleep, so I wrote this..
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I look calm
But I´m screaming inside

It is loud
They forced silence to hide

It was beautiful
But all the flowers died

I might look like a soldier with a country to save
But I´m not brave, I´m not brave

I might be standing with my head high
Like I allready forgot and forgave

But I´m really running

Fear is coming
Fear is coming

Reviews

[Laura Harrison]

You did a fantastic job of writing this from someone else's perspective. A hauntingly sad read.

[Johanna]

Thankyou :))

[Blue]

I can feel the intensity of what this soldier is facing. Wow, just wow.

[Johanna]

Thankyou Arzel :)

[Avinash]

Somehow we all are attached to our collective past even before our birth in some clueless way. May be it is genes, reincarnation or spirits but whatever it is; the intensity transcends through generation and it is integral to human psyche.

[Johanna]

thankyou for your thoughts and review avinash :))

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Wow Johanna this was very very beautiful I read 2 times out loud its amazing:) What makes it so beautiful is it speaks from the heart:)

[Johanna]

Wow :) thankyou!! :))

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I'm serious this is a poem needs to be shared with every man woman faces a life in war:) Its amazing:) Your welcome:)

[Luke L]

Great piece very intense emotion

[Johanna]

Thankyou Luke :) Glad you liked it :) I was kind of uncertain on wether to put it up or not