Say When

Say When

A Poem by Johanna
"

Say when this is over..

"

Say when this is over

"Call me then" I told her

Say when happy endings have returned

Say when this is over

You´ll cry on my shoulder

and we'll fix all the bridges that we burned


Say when this is over

"Love me then" I told her

Say when the tables have been turned

Say when this is over

Time will fade as it grows older

and we'll try to remember everything we learned


Say when this is over

"Call me then" I told her

I´ll be waiting by the phone

Say when this is over

You´ll cry on my shoulder

Say when I don't have to be alone

© 2015 Johanna


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this piece really speaks to me having a similar struggle with my bf at the moment. say when i don't have to be alone.. really got me. the repetition of Call me then. really ads and works well in the flow.


Posted 9 Years Ago


Johanna

9 Years Ago

I hope it works out soon
glad it is relateable
This feels like a very sad love song, especially with the refrain "Call me, love me then".
It feels like love is always lurking in the future, just out of hand.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Johanna

9 Years Ago

That´s what I was aiming for.. thankyou Alessander :) glad you liked it
its just True, Honest....., Really Nice.

Regards

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on February 27, 2015
Last Updated on March 6, 2015
Tags: Say, when, this, over, burned, returned, her, endings, older, learned, tabels, shoulder, bridges

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Johanna
Johanna

Norway



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