Please

Just one minute please.

It is all I need

for me to ruin this,

and then you can leave.

Reviews

[Sher{alynn} Veron{ica}]

Great haiku, great message

[.......]

I can sure feel this, so well done!

[Daniel Atkinson]

God. I love writing short poems that have a lot of depth to them, and you've hit this spot-on. In four lines, you managed to create a tired, loveless character that would have taken a whole story to develop otherwise. Nicely done.

[Lourisa]

Brilliant! I think most of us can identify with this some time or another, and some of us can identify with it all the time! It is amazing how much can be said in so few little lines. Love it.

[MAC]

feel ya here!! excellent write that sums up my life in four lines.....perfect!