Listening

Listening
to the
stillness grow,
thunder distant
rumbles low,
raindrops fall
from heavy skies,
wiping sleep
from mornings eyes,
a passing burst
as sun breaks through,
a freshness filled
with life anew.

Reviews

[Jon Roggie]

I like this. Simple imagery, combined with a touch of emotion to finish it off.

[Mary Bosworth]

A very touching write indeed from a skillful pen.

[Lisa]

I was transported to this very moment. A calm before the storm. Thank you, John!

[Anne Timmins]

Awesome
I stand and applaud such a complex write

[Matching Socks]

Good morning to you too. :)
Lovely poem.

[Lauriegirl]

haunting and very thought inspiring Good job

[Mary C]

this is a pure delight to read!! so lovely