True love starts somewhere.........

True love starts somewhere.........

A Poem by John Phoenix Hutchinson.



True love starts somewhere.... ( A Poem for Hazel)



When bond is complete,

Words will be spoken,

Who will speak first,

The heart as a token.


The look in her eye,

His strong embrace,

Both feel the gravity,

The emotions of grace


For here they will find.....


Oath carved in stone,

Never to be broken,

Who will speak first,

True love has woken.



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John Phoenix Hutchinson (c) 2013

© 2013 John Phoenix Hutchinson.


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truer words were never spoken

Posted 2 Years Ago


A beautiful, lifting dedication. There is such a feeling of joy that rises in this awakening.

Posted 5 Years Ago


John Phoenix Hutchinson.

5 Years Ago

Thank you Craig!
i agree --- got to start somewhere! great writing!

Posted 5 Years Ago


John Phoenix Hutchinson.

5 Years Ago

The start of something big :)
Very beautiful indeed. Such emotion weave through your words and the imagery makes one sigh. Great flow and rhyme too.

Posted 5 Years Ago


John Phoenix Hutchinson.

5 Years Ago

Thanks WW and for the competition placing :)
Soooo beautiful and well spoken. I like the rhyming scheme too ...Bravo

Posted 5 Years Ago


John Phoenix Hutchinson.

5 Years Ago

A pleasure Sami as always :)
Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
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Sue
Nice to see a new poem - lovely :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


John Phoenix Hutchinson.

5 Years Ago

Take a break from the mountains occasionally..........
Ah I know what just your saying here I think John........Who will say I love you first! You big softy you! Top work.

Posted 5 Years Ago


John Phoenix Hutchinson.

5 Years Ago

Cheers Mark :)
Id love to know what "Hazel" thought of this poem you have written for her. Did she melt? I bet she did! :) I would for sure!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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John Phoenix Hutchinson.

5 Years Ago

I'll let you know Emma.............

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John Phoenix Hutchinson.
John Phoenix Hutchinson.

Boot Eskdale, Cumbria, United Kingdom



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