The Cockle Pond

I stroll around the Cockle Pond,

to try and make my back respond.

On the way home the Sun shone fierce,

making my eyes fill with tears.

If only my mind and back will bond.

Author's Note

This is my very first attempt at Poetry that I have shared. I find it helps me deal with all kinds of issues in my life. But I would like to learn and improve.

Reviews

[Aphy!]

Really nice first start so far. You have potentially but need to brush up a bit and you'll be perfect. Other than that I have no complaints really!
Aphy