There

THERE

Being one less to visit,
And, of course, life goes on,
But the home is a house
Now the woman has gone.

She still haunts the kitchen,
And is heard in the hall;
Her absence is present
Every time that I call.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Beautiful expression here. A touching write John. Tells me she will be greatly missed but well remembered. Nice job.

Chris

[John]

Thanks Chris

[Ken e Bujold]

As achingly beautiful an elegy as any I've read. In its brevity so much is so eloquently expressed that all I can say is you loved her well and truly John

[John]

Thanks Ken. Glad you enjoyed it.

[John the Baptist]

Understated but very poignant in its expression of grief. Its spareness and brevity makes the feeling more intense. Well done.

[John]

Thank you. You expressed exactly what I was after in this piece.

[Corset]

yes, what John said so perfectly.