You're Not Dead Yet

I smile, as the waves roll in,
Contemplating just where we begin.
Mother nature, it was never my intention
For my race to disgrace you with our inventions. 

The Sun shines so bright,
That it burns my eyes.
What the ancients must have prophesied 
In just a modest attempt to define.

I sit amongst my brethren,
Many have misguided views of Heaven.
But with that, you must sever;
When you realize that nothing lasts for ever.

The waves act as a chronometer,
The Sun, a safety net.
You are the interpreter,
And you're not dead yet.

Author's Note

5/12/12

Reviews

[WhimsicalHeart20]

This is bbeeeuttiiffuuuuulllll.... so beautiful I forgot the 'a' in beautiful.

[Jonny The Savage]

haha thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Just something I wrote 3 years ago relaxing by a lake on a hot Summer day,

[WhimsicalHeart20]

aww wow. knowing that made it even more special. I hope to see more of your writings. I'm pretty new here so I'm not very sure how to navigate the website yet but I will definitely look for you.
Great first impression here :)

[Jonny The Savage]

There's a lot of my work on here. Although I'm not sure how 'beautiful' it all is lol. It's pretty easy, you'll get the hang of it.