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A Poem by Joanne Jayne
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Another snippet of lyrics I wrote about my sleep paralysis.

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Dark shapes, against the wall
When I know you're inside me, feeding my pain

Frightened of what isn't real, and I'm dying for you to begin

Only the night to fear, when silence watches over me
And screaming as you draw near, with eyes open am I still dreaming?

Save me
I won't fight myself
It's just another nightmare
In this demons cell

Break me
Dying by myself
In this frozen nightmare
Where the evil dwell

© 2014 Joanne Jayne


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"In this frozen nightmare... where the evil dwell"

Lovely and very dark composition of lyrics you've come up with. Once again, you seem to be saving/capturing your dreams and ... shaping 'em well with the analogies of your darken words. I believe, you've been passed through some loves aches which helping you to get healed up with such passion of art. Songs always heal up your wounds so do mares of past life, somehow. Nice imagery.


Posted 8 Years Ago


I think "Dark Shapes" works a little better. It is more concise and focused.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Joanne Jayne
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A Poem by Joanne Jayne