Your Precious Heart

Never have the one you love

Rejection is a hard shove.

On, your precious heart

Though it may skip a beat,

Someone will beat.

Your precious heart

 

Cracked and broken,

Your heart will be frozen.

Oh, your precious heart

Love will help as much as it will kill,

Love is a wonderful yet disastrous pill.

For, your precious heart

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

I do like this poem. I love it actually, and I usually don't like poems. I love the line "Love is a wonderful yet disastrous pill." I have no critizim what so ever. Fantabulous poem :)

and yes, I did just say fantabulous :)