Abound by Destiny

A poem on memories, the mystery of love, and that one thing in life we all seek and yearn after...

 

As the moon rises

Its silent glow reveals

A figure, wait, two!

On a dune tip concealed

A speck in infinity

As waves lap the sand

Two shadows on a beach

Walking hand in hand

 Warm gentle voices

Ripples the crisp melody

As the sea whispers to all

Its unrevealing mystery

A secret that yearns

Across the seven seas

But to fall upon deaf ears

Only to few it is revealed

As two lovers walk along

Their bond is made eternal

A mysterious magic -

Whistles its song

Entwining two hearts -

Abound by destiny

Author's Note

Written to capture the imagination of the reader and create a world of mystery, magic and infinite possiblities in a few lines...

Reviews

[Elizabeth]

This has a really nice ethereal feel to it. I disagree with the comment about "iffy rhyming". The mood and the pace are well constructed. Nice work!

[Pluto]

Some of the rhyming is a bit iffy, and you misspelt speck spec; but that's a typo, and it's good. And that is all that really matters.