Atlas

Atlas

A Poem by Solidad
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Dedicated to my husband Joel. "I will love you today as I did yesterday..."

"
I will love you today
as I did yesterday,
Chasing your ghost
to the river Styx.
Diving in head first,
I celebrate the the love you bore.
Building me from the ground up;
pillars of romanced dreams
supporting the stitch work of my reality.
Carrying the liquid of my secrets,
with both hands cupped together.
Falling into the gravitational pull,
of your heart.
"The warmest place,
the sun never shone."
Spindles of my forever unraveled
for you.
As you left the world to orbit
on its own.
By merely gazing at me,
through your blue topaz pupils.


© 2011 Solidad


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Soli, I love your poems. I wish you would write more of them... This one is superb and a wonderful tribute to your husband.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You left the world to orbit on its own by merely gazing at me through your blue topaz eyes.....gorgeous!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i can't imagine the dimension of loss

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem has many milestones both high and low, but is a declaration that true love will violently subdue any obstacle that should dare step into its path.
Your imagery is always so forceful. I love your "punchy" style.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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