Subterfuge

Subterfuge

A Poem by Solidad

Their world had ended

in a firey collage of,

"He said" and "She said."

 

© 2011 Solidad


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You've captured a tragedy in the smallest of spaces.
It is sad to see a relationship end, but perhaps sadder
to know that perhaps it never was. There can be no
love without trust. Your writings are 100% heart and
that is no idiom for coming up short.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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tis how so many relationships end, sadly so isn't it?

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short and to the point but for some reason I feel a lot of meaning behind those lines.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Most conflicts start this way and it seems end this way as well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You've captured a tragedy in the smallest of spaces.
It is sad to see a relationship end, but perhaps sadder
to know that perhaps it never was. There can be no
love without trust. Your writings are 100% heart and
that is no idiom for coming up short.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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