The Virtue In You

Just Thoughts...

Inexplicable Control

An endeavoring control

That consumes your inner soul

Your mind, your emotions, your instincts,

In truth all your humanity

Is crucially stripped away right before your eyes

Yet you feel nothing when your aura

Converts into the dying embers

Gradually perishing within this piece

Of my solemn heart that was meant

For you and only you

Yet in this spur of desolate events

I no longer see the face of you

But your inner more intruder

That I inconceivably don’t recognize

You for what you stand for

But instead the side of you I yearned to never see

There is now a unrepairable rupture

Within this family of mine

But who cares right?

It seems memories like these

Go astray to my fellow companions

But these moments are unforgettable to me

Not because of your desolate actions

But rather allowing this malignant figure

Control your vitality and make you destructible

When all this time you stood for

The adverse virtue in you

Author's Note

Any Thoughts?

Reviews

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Really deep. I see many things here. I guess when 1st reading before getting to the family part I see one who gives an ear to listen , 1 who gives there time and wishes it not to be wasted, I see 1 who is fake on the other end never there never that friend. I see the value of respect and an over turn hand one never will to be the same and that is never within demand. I really respect people I do I give my time my ear to be if be person or online I see and yet I don't get it from all and when I see that the wages begin to fall, And it hurts ones emotions to be played at hand like a deck of cards. Yet I always treated with kindness and gave so much heart inside to be. I just don't understand what makes 1 not want to show respect and love and caring concern to me its raw and cold and doesn't set in my wind and changes all things making them not so much a friend. I seen family treat me this way as well use me abuse me beg my time to be but when I need them no never to be found. That's what I felt in your write.