Self-deceiver

Self-deceiver

A Poem by JulianaSun
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The lies that keep us going...

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I thought that we were living in a Home,
but it was just a House of Ashes.
Already burnt. 
                    Already gone.

© 2015 JulianaSun


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JulianaSun
I´m starting to like writing short poems...

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An excellent use of 22 words; from the tittle to the last period

Posted 8 Years Ago


JulianaSun

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)

J
A short poem that describes the passage of much time. Time to start a home, time for love to burn out, time for realization to arrive. Nicely done in a small space, dear poet.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JulianaSun

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing and reading :) It´s much apprecited.

J
Misery

8 Years Ago

You are truly welcome. Thank you for sharing your inspirations.

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Added on July 26, 2015
Last Updated on July 26, 2015
Tags: poem, house, home, ashes, sad