To Be In Love With You

To Be In Love With You

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a love poem ~

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steve hanks art

 

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To catch the tender breath of night’s soft velvet skies

and steal away the hours lost in your lovely eyes

Then count each fleck of light shimmering just for you

and wonder how one gaze can do what it can do

 

To feel the lightest brush of silk upon my lips

and find it softer than the moonlight’s pale eclipse

Though smooth it sends a spark, igniting passion’s fire

quenched only by your kiss…this stir of warm desire

 

That has my heart pounding, as the flame gently grows

and at once I’ve fallen, like petals from a rose

I waste not a second, nor worry of the time

but cherish each moment in feelings so sublime

 

For anytime apart feels like eternity

while desperately I ache to embrace the beauty

of everything you are and everything you do

Yes, this is how it feels to be in love with you

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© 2014 MsJewel


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Beautiful artwork and words. When love is abounded. No better place to be.
"Though smooth it sends a spark, igniting passion’s fire
quenched only by your kiss…this stir of warm desire"
A perfect ending to the excellent poem dear friend.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words on my poetry this evening :) Julie
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome my dear friend. I love your kind words.



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For anytime apart feels like eternity
while desperately I ache to embrace the beauty
of everything you are and everything you do
Yes, this is how it feels to be in love with you

Sigh!!! I am enamored by your work Julie. There's just something so subtle & sensual about the work you do.
It just calms me and sinks me into the space I'm in, cozy & light. A true master of the words of love you are my friend. I don't mind getting lost in your art.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Wow! Thank you for the lovely comment and compliment. You are too kind. :) Julie
Wow a true romantic masterpiece in the making. You should get this published A.S.A.P. A wonderful and endear write Julie. Great work. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your wonderful comment. I appreciate you~ :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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