Paint the Sky

Paint the Sky

A Poem by MsJewel
"

~ just a little scribble ~

"

 

art ~ elena dudina

 

 

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Somewhere beyond a dream

he paints the sky a velvet amethyst

 

sailing above the rocks and sand

above the trembling ocean

 

A breath through my window…bathed in moonlight

 

Whispering…

“Wake my sweet angel”

 

And I awaken,

for his voice is the blue bird song

in a music box of beautiful memories

 

a lullaby

to soothe my soul

the poetry

within two hearts forever intertwined

 

I take this hand that holds my heart

for it is warm and it is strong

and he is unforgettable

 

And for a moment in time

we paint the sky

 

…somewhere beyond a dream

~~~

© 2014 MsJewel


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The etherial images this piece conveys in the mind are haunting. Dreams can help us to live better in the real world. The security you felt when you were together is rising within your dreams to keep you feeling safe and contented.
You express love in so many ways that I don't think many of us have reached that level.


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment my sweet friend. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful weekend. :) Ju.. read more



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╰☆╮*sigh* Beautiful. This soothing tone and rhythm makes this piece remarkable. Write on!╰☆╮

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Years Ago

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie
The etherial images this piece conveys in the mind are haunting. Dreams can help us to live better in the real world. The security you felt when you were together is rising within your dreams to keep you feeling safe and contented.
You express love in so many ways that I don't think many of us have reached that level.


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment my sweet friend. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful weekend. :) Ju.. read more
"And for a moment in time
we paint the sky"
Good to paint the sky. Allow us to dream and hope great dreams. I enjoyed the poem. Filled with beauty and positive energy. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie
That's a lovely poem. Beautifully written thanks for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Years Ago

Thank you Emma :) Julie
Julie, Julie, this is poetry at its best. What a truly magnificent poem. You have a genuine and natural way of writing that reflects and captures gorgeous emotions effortlessly.

I love the line ' his voice..in a music box of beautiful memories..and the last few lines took my breath away..this is my favorite of yours this far.. your expression is exquisite..






Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much... dreams can be wonderful...and then we wake up. Thank goodness for poetry! :) J.. read more
I fall out of words when it's time to submit a review to a poem like this.
love any work involving any conception of "dreams", and love how they take us into places no one can see but other intoxicated dreamers :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment from one dreamer to another :) Julie
So Julie, do your little scribbles always come with a full box of crayolas??? I think so anyway.. those last 3 lines are wonderful... paint away my friend..

~~redzone

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Years Ago

I like to color - but only if I can color outside the lines...:)
redzone

6 Years Ago

Lines??? Are there lines??? Colors have no lines, they bleed and blend into each other... hmmmm kin.. read more
MsJewel

6 Years Ago

You are very sweet.
This poem was quite beautiful. I enjoyed this very much.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
If he exists..your life will shine..happy ever after.
Needs expressed very well Princess.

Admiration.
Scott

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Years Ago

Thank you Scott. Have a lovely day my friend. :) Julie

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Tags: fantasy, dreams, romance, memories, love, loss, msjewel, poetry

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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